Friday, November 22, 2013

Informative Research Paper Self Review


The topic that I’ve decided to research and write about is “The Effects of Forcing Sports on Children”. With this topic being a very debatable topic, it is important to inform people of the effects. Also being from a small town where youth and adult sports is important, this topic sort of hits home so I hard time not expressing my opinion. My paper still needs some work for sure but I feel like I’ve made some progress from my last paper. I noticed that I do need to follow the self-review questions a little closer and try not to wonder off topic but I’m confident I will it will be fine.

1 comment:

  1. Sarah, I commend you for shedding light on this topic. All too often I see over zealous parents pushing their children to succeed in the field rather than focus on their academic achievements. I often wonder if it's about the kids or the parents. I love wrestling but my son is not into it at all. I wish he was but he's not and I have had to accept that and move forward. He wants to play baseball (it's in our blood, my grandfather was signed with the Cardinals) but I do not want to devote the time it takes to run him back and forth to practice and games. I will, but I won't like it. I like you am finding the review process very helpful in making sure that I do what the assignment asks of me. Keep up the good work!

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