I think that Tim Collins did an amazing job in describing
Marie Fatayi-Williams’ speech in “Straight from the Heart”. Mr. Collins makes the reader feel like they
are standing in the crowd during the actual speech about the death of her son.
He paints the picture of the red double-decker bus that involved in the bombing
in the city of London. Tim describes
Marie’s words to “have fed such an acute hunger for explanation, have slaked
such a thirst (hunger & thirst are
related words) for expression of the sheer horror of Thursday’s events.” The examples “orators, statesmen and playwrights,
of Shakespeare, Churchill, or Lincoln” are superordinates
used to describe how great her speech was. Mr. Collins gives the visual of Marie holding
her son’s picture as her emotions of despair; hopelessness and the longing to
be with her son makes the reader feel her heartache uses pathos. Since Mr. Collins
relates and shares the emotions of being a writer gives him creditably (ethos). At the end of Tim Collins analysis of “Straight
from the Heart”, the reader has heartache for Marie’s loss but also the feeling
of inspiration due to the fact that she could stand up in front of a crowd and
give such a courageous speech. Tim Collins' analysis is just breathtaking.
Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI couldn’t have said it better myself. Tim Collins really did make me feel as though I was sitting in the audience listening to Marie Fatayi-William’s speech. Mr. Collins did an excellent job using pathos throughout his speech. My heart broke for Marie as he described her speech. He used amazing details that brought the speech to life.